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exposed
By Meshell
Tiptoeing on the shattered glass from a snow globe that used to hold my
dreams
Hope froze
Cracking upon the surface
Dead lies
Skatter the hypocracy of potrayed half truths
Unveiled fragments
Disclosed upon impact
Paving the road to life
Renders me helpless
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Copyright 2012 Meshell
Published on Tuesday, February 28, 2012.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, March 28, 2012, Meshell
(34)
wrote:
ur welcome and thank u for ur understanding towards my passion
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A former member wrote:
Powerfully rendered. Words stenciled with a drawn spirit of true inner-reflection. It's so nice to read you again.
Thank you for your comment on my poetry in return.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2012, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
Not very many words, but says a hell of a lot. The picture of what life is supposed to be, but behind the curtain is hidden all the sordid things that they don't want you to know. Nicely done
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On Friday, March 9, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
thank u for ur passion on my write.. not to many ppl have read that and understood :)
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On Sunday, March 4, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
thank u :)
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A former member wrote:
nice write :)
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
This gives me the impression of being in a depressed state, or maybe realizing how twisted the world is. Maybe both? Either way its wonderful!
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On Wednesday, February 29, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
the image u got from this write was correct.. we r given these rules to abide by a group who doesnt even follow what there trying to make us believe in and there power to take years away from those who dont follow the same rules not even they do.
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A former member wrote:
love it,that was your bestmi believe you can give more,await...
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
i dont believe i understand your comment..
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
nevermind if im correct the M took the place of a space... im sure i will post plenty more it helps me release the crowding inside :)
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A former member wrote:
hmmm sorry,i said i realy liked this poem the most,and i believe you can give even more,so i just wait,i don't know how to fan you,i am new here,but you write beautiful words
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
it should be on the left hand side of all profiles
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