Crazy

By OptimisticPessimist

The blood's pattern it made as it endlessly swirled
Through my head like candle smoke through the air, formed pictures
Only sane people would fear.

Am I sane?
Knowing my crying life is slowly ebbing away?
Being comforted by this mere thought?
What am I then?
Crazy?

Oh well. 

The pure knowledge augmenting inside me that not one being shall shed a tear,
For me ,
Simply makes me treasure this thriving death even more. 

Crazy?

That's definetly 

Me.

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Copyright 2012 OptimisticPessimist
Published on Wednesday, January 4, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

My first poem...crazy? Yes.
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  • A former member wrote: "We all go a little mad sometimes" - Norman Bates. I love this poem. Thank you for sharing man and welcome to DP. I look forward to seeing you around! :)

  • A former member wrote: I remember when you wrote the beginnings to this... (: I have the old version written down in my first journal collection... (: I LOVE YOU honney (:

  • OptimisticPessimist On Thursday, January 5, 2012, OptimisticPessimist (29)By person wrote:

    Love you too babe. I have more work coming.. we'll see how that goes..

  • A former member wrote: It will go well of course.

  • Devilish On Wednesday, January 4, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Join the club... Ofcourse it's just me in my club.. Hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry. You eva need anything i'm a click away... Roam around the site and read others... as it will bring them to you.. Scholar

  • OptimisticPessimist On Wednesday, January 4, 2012, OptimisticPessimist (29)By person wrote:

    Gracias devilish

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