Speed

By Chalin

body shots
from the
dead;

your mouth
moves along,
taking me
for a ride

A frustrated
reaction of
elation is
torn from
my unwilling
body.

I deserve
everything you
deny

my confused,
emaciated girl

it will
Do.

let's make it
a point
Two.

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Copyright 2003 Chalin
Published on Tuesday, July 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    hmmmm... don't believe i've read you before. excellent piece. sublime in language and meaning... push pull of love

  • anathema On Tuesday, July 8, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    interesting. i have a feeling this one is going to plague me. and that's a good thing in a poem- i like to be disturbed.

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