Mind Rain

By AdorkablePsycho

Can we see beyond the rage
of a time
that's forgotten where to go
to find the love
that's vanishing from the depths
of heart's content?
When the lives we've consumed
have left us unforgiven,
speaking in tongues,
clinging to the lost.
When all begin to sleep,
when pain is out salvation,
when our dreams are explicit enough
to think true thoughts.
I stare into your eyes,
held there by your vacant expression.
I know now the answer,
this is not love you give me, but death.

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Copyright 2011 AdorkablePsycho
Published on Sunday, October 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • matteus On Friday, January 18, 2013, matteus (28)By person wrote:

    well worthy of poem of the day extravagant work and a pleasure to read

  • A former member wrote: Much like the others, I have to agree, stupendous poem and the ending very much surprised me.

  • terris crimson On Tuesday, October 25, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    this poem pleases me. it leaves me with a well followed sense of contentment. you have done well. congradulations and welcome to the valley.^^

  • AdorkablePsycho On Monday, October 24, 2011, AdorkablePsycho (4)By person wrote:

    Thank you all very much. I am glad you liked it.

  • dwells On Monday, October 24, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Good buildup to a surprise ending, great job and thanks!

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Sunday, October 23, 2011, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Cold... very cold and to a grave point. I find myself fascinated with the eery winds I envision during this piece. Great craftsmanship.

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