Result Of My Sins

By Phantasmagoria

 Oh, my darkest cloud,
Why must you hover over me?
I drown in your tears,
As if they were the strongest sea.

Under my steel umbrella, 
I can not hide from you.
The acid rain pours down,
When it hits, it melts right through.

My ears start to bleed,
From your thundering cries.
The lightning is striking,
And its blinding my eyes.

I hear the calm whispers
Of your poisonous snow.
As my whole body shivers,
The wind starts to blow.

Every day of my life
Is a murderous winter.
The hail tapers down
In the form of a splinter.

Will the sun ever shine
And warm my cold skin?
I promise to be good,
It wont happen again!




 

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Copyright 2011 Phantasmagoria
Published on Sunday, October 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • QuartzAl18 On Saturday, June 8, 2013, QuartzAl18 (21)By person wrote:

    I am lost for words. All I can say is that your words speak to me so intriguingly, Its so ill the way write. Simply love it!

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully Tragic and Impressive Delivery. Magnificent flow of imagery and detailed wording. Appreciated art form. And I humbly thank you for your consideration of my small work, and for bookmarking me. Thank you

  • Phantasmagoria On Thursday, February 2, 2012, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    You are very much welcome! and thanks for commenting :)

  • A former member wrote: Powerful emotions. Wonderful piece! R.Y.

  • Phantasmagoria On Monday, October 24, 2011, Phantasmagoria (121)By person wrote:

    Ah, I see the mistakes. Thanks 4 telling me I'll be sure to fix them.

  • Cant walk away On Sunday, October 23, 2011, Cant walk away (30)By person wrote:

    beautiful!

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