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By SaintNHB

Dashing woes,
I execute!
My little hope,
that will come to ruin!
If I cease to exist
I'll claim my thrown with bloody wrists.
To be a ghost of who I am
(An apparition of the past)
Or should I say who I was?
It takes nothing more than gun in hand.
Trigger, Clank!
I'm on my way
And nothing else will satisfy
Wires snipped inside my mind
Oh what a heroic tragedy.

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Published on Sunday, August 21, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I'm horrid at grammar, so please be patient with me. :)

Comments on ".Untitled."

A former member wrote: It has been my experience that writing about suicide has been a way to exorcise those thoughts for a while. I enjoyed this very much.
On Monday, August 29, 2011, maliceman (32) wrote:

ah, if this were to happen, the world will lose an inspirational writer. great image and use of Onomatopoeia
On Tuesday, August 30, 2011, SaintNHB (41) wrote:

Thank you.
On Monday, August 29, 2011, Ladyhawke (392) wrote:

I agree with shawn. You have a unique style, all your own. It makes every poem you write have a little twang to it. It's very good. Favorite line(s) were, "To be a ghost of who I am, An apparation of the past". Brilliant. Brava!!
On Monday, August 22, 2011, Alchemist (679) wrote:

I usually don't like suicide poems but I really enjoyed this because of your unique writing style.
On Sunday, November 27, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273) wrote:

same here.
On Sunday, August 21, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Wow! What an into... I like that... Hello there pretty... Welcome to DarkPoetry... I can't wait to see more of your work...