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little ache
By nur hidayah
little ache
muttering and chirping
like a mad girl
in a
carousel dream.
i can't tell by your whispers
whether
you are a tumour
or a little attempt at humour
to scare these
young bones
into dying.
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Copyright 2011 nur hidayah
Published on Sunday, August 21, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
i don't know. i died. i'm afraid to write.Comments on "little ache"
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A former member wrote:
i know this all too well. sullen aching. need. a dying fire
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A former member wrote:
Powerful short poem. Hope to see you return, nuri, & I hope that all is well.
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A former member wrote:
i love you. this hurts me badly for you..
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A former member wrote:
nuri... come back ... you're too tragic, and all too fragile...
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A former member wrote:
a sad little piece, i hope this is all metaphor.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2011, dwells
(4177)
wrote:
Unusual message and loved the back-and-forth in the second verse. In a word "worry".
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