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Anvils beat
By kenneth
The roaring flame
The blistering heat
All
of this I tame
With my anvils beat
The steel I beat it
To
create perfection
I still must shape it
It is my obsession
A wonderful work of art
Soon to be complete
Into this I pour
my heart
Still I hear the anvils beat
With a razor edge
Perfectly
tempered
I’ve made with my sledge
But still the beat is heard
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Copyright 2011 kenneth
Published on Friday, August 12, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 28, 2011, Alchemist
(688)
wrote:
I liked it, the piece had a good flow, I work at a train yard so tools and noise is always around me but I haven't had the inspiration like you to write about it. Welcome to DP.
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On Friday, August 12, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Hi Kenneth - the last line should rhyme I think? Otherwise technically perfect and very well-stated.
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