Shhh...A Prayer Sir

By soloiq

Shhh...another prayer Sir
don't make a sound
Ya, it's those humans
on the ground

You should help 'em
same as before...
and lose the pen!
there is no score

unless Your counting
the sick and hurt
all those dead
in the dirt

who begged for aid
pleading Your name
the very ones
You always blame

for what?... who cares
give 'em a hand
look at her...
she can barely stand

why do we listen
and not do a thing?
uh oh
their starting to sing

''Your so good
la- la- la
love You more
than my-Ma-Ma''

Sir, that song!
how is this fair?
HELLO... where are You
Anyone there?!!


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Copyright 2011 soloiq
Published on Monday, August 1, 2011.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • Blood Saga On Tuesday, August 2, 2011, Blood Saga (78)By person wrote:

    Oh this is absolutely excellent.

  • Devilish On Monday, August 1, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I want this carved in my fuckin skin... Sir that song! how is this fair? Hello! where are you anyone there... Fuck me! Those four lines were better than a grudge fuck... Not that I would know=> My bad... puts the bottle down.... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: i like it:} Scholar

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