I am....

By Noztic

I am standing here in my glowing beauty,
I am looking out into the wide open sky.
I am smiling with the greatest duality,
I am looking down and straighten my tie.

I am taking my first step into the open,
I am holding my head high as I stare.
I am optimistic in the feeling of this zen,
I am walking across looking for the maiden that is fair.

I am searching for the one that is just for me,
I am ready for the commitment that I desire.
I am not going to yeild till finally I am free,
I am not free till someone sparks my fire.

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Copyright 2011 Noztic
Published on Tuesday, July 5, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Nameless Pariah On Wednesday, July 20, 2011, Nameless Pariah (126)By person wrote:

    Positive indeed. It certainly lifted my spirits. :) Great poem.

  • A former member wrote: I enjoyed this one... Its like a dream to me... like walking into a dream of what may or may not happen

  • lupus tenebrae On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    "I am not free till someone sparks my fire." Perhaps like a phoenix, freedom comes from a rebirth, rising from the ashes of a previous iteration. Freedom of any sort inspires positivity, well written. Write onward. Scholar

  • MikeShank1989 On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, MikeShank1989 (92)By person wrote:

    Very much enjoyed the positive vibes from this piece. Well written sir!

  • A former member wrote: positive attitude to the rest of your life.. searching. smiles do get a great many things. i liked this. what a great way to start my day .. with a positive outlook. thank you so much for sharing.

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