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I am....
By Noztic
I am standing
here in my glowing beauty,
I am
looking out into the wide open sky.
I am smiling with the greatest duality,
I am looking down and straighten my tie.
I am taking my first step into the open,
I am holding my head high as I stare.
I am optimistic in the feeling of this zen,
I am walking across looking for the maiden
that is fair.
I am searching for the one that is just for me,
I am ready for the commitment that I desire.
I am not going to yeild till finally I am
free,
I
am not free
till someone sparks my fire.
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Copyright 2011 Noztic
Published on Tuesday, July 5, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "I am...."
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2011, Nameless Pariah
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wrote:
Positive indeed. It certainly lifted my spirits. :) Great poem.
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this one... Its like a dream to me... like walking into a dream of what may or may not happen
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
"I am not free till someone sparks my fire." Perhaps like a phoenix, freedom comes from a rebirth, rising from the ashes of a previous iteration. Freedom of any sort inspires positivity, well written. Write onward.
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, MikeShank1989
(93) wrote:
Very much enjoyed the positive vibes from this piece. Well written sir!
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A former member wrote:
positive attitude to the rest of your life.. searching. smiles do get a great many things. i liked this. what a great way to start my day .. with a positive outlook. thank you so much for sharing.
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