Loose Tape

By Sin Amor


 I try to lose you in the passage of time.
Numerous Shallow sunsets over the blue horizon
I've given up, passion,
Torpid Unrepentance,
Obstinate avariciousness,
As apathetic as an athiests dream,
Yet, I still cannot bring myself,
To tear up these old letters,
Or throw away this box of unsent gifts.



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Copyright 2011 Sin Amor
Published on Wednesday, June 8, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i think there are always memories and such that we try to rid ourselves of, but people are hard to lose i think, more than just those physical reminders, they leave small bits of themselves with us.

  • ubiquitoussoul On Friday, June 17, 2011, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    well worded..numerous shallow sunsets..gives a repetitious feeling..of no change..lack of real acceleration ....poetically driven well..passion slipping towards greed..need for physical replenishment.. as an atheists dream.nice touch there..selfishness in the realm of higher power.juggernaut to your past but then all of a sudden it brings you down.. the unsent gifts..unread letters.. brings this to a halt.. repenting change.. great entry

  • pureevil8 On Thursday, June 9, 2011, pureevil8 (48)By person wrote:

    Good write, defenately short and sweet.

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 9, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Short perfect... to the point... I like that! Scholar

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