the tomb

By alex herewane

I wrote a letter three hundred and sixty five pages long
some one read it and called it a book
I wrote a poem three words long
some one read it and said I was wrong
I wrote a song fifteen minutes long
some one played it and now it is gone
where do the words go when I'm  not at home
how does the ocean flow these are things Iv'e never known
what would the world be if Adam had left that apple alone
would we have found the joys of Eve if you get what I mean
Question everything Iv'e read, everything I have ever heard
question you question me, find the feeling behind the word, find the reason
the truth and the absurb, walking in chains inside the word
where do the words go when I'm not at home
where do I go when I'm all alone

In the event of something happening then I am prepared for nothing cause nothing ever happens thats for sure
In the event that I remember something then I am prepared to forget it as quick as it came, I been racking my brain but I can't remember anything yet
Oh that, well, yes, Iv'e learned from that and now I'm moving on
where do the words go when I'm not at home
where do I go when I'm all alone

there's a tomb 
it only has one door and it only has one key
there's a crack in my heart, that is how the light gets in
there are words plastered all over the walls
I am not responsible they fall, I pick them up
where do the words go when I'm not at home
where do I go when I'm all alone




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Copyright 2011 alex herewane
Published on Monday, January 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is the first i've ever 'rolled the red dice'. i'm glad it brought me here. There are really good questions here in a sing~song rhythm that kind of lulls one into their own questions. Completely unique idea to write a letter three hundred and sixty five pages long...the story of a year of your life? i like that. In respect to this is that famous quote by...who...i don't know..."The question is the answer", and i think this poem rides those rails, for without the question we'd never know more. You have harnessed the mind of a wide~eyed child here, i think that's an aspect that we should all refuse to let die inside us.

  • terris crimson On Tuesday, September 13, 2011, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    deep and amazing I am officially in love with your work ^^

  • unspeakable truth On Monday, January 24, 2011, unspeakable truth (94)By person wrote:

    There is such depth in this. It left me questioning and yet I do that by nature. Do you we ask to many questions at times so needing an answer that we entomb our self? Surely we do, and the words I hope go to a gentle place when they aren't being minded ... where they are regarded for the bravery they show, and are cherished for the feelings they invoke. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: This piece took my breath away. Now I am starting to question everything. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: oh wow... it's a perfect song for lost time.. the dissolving of ideas and creations.. you use such instinctively surreal language to capture the mind's voyage... so very beautiful. Scholar

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