grey dust

By boneplate

turning to pink
as the sun
swallows
the remnants
of the lost.
turning them
to dust.

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Copyright 2010 boneplate
Published on Thursday, November 11, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Nice...I love the power of the sun depicted in here. Turning the lost into dust.. wicked!

  • Artanis On Saturday, January 8, 2011, Artanis (56)By person wrote:

    simple, easy to remember. I like it:)

  • A former member wrote: simple, yet anything but.......wonderful write!

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