Frantic.....

By musicalsuicide

I lie here in this pit
My whole body drenched with agony
I cannot talk, I cannto hear
I can only see the darkness
The moonlit trees brush and shove against each other
To let me know that they're still with me
You can see it in my eyes
I lie eager to get out
I lie eager to escape
From this hell
From this hole, much like the hole in my heart
The anguish is unbearable
I close my eyes trying to lessen my despair
But the sorrow finds away
To inject itself into my bloodstream
The sadness always comes
The pain always finds me
I lash out a frantic scream
I hope that someone will hear me
I hope that someone will come...................

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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Published on Monday, October 4, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • WarTorn On Thursday, April 26, 2012, WarTorn (40)By person wrote:

    lovely piece

  • A former member wrote: your write had me captivated. the agony and despair made real by your writing. very very nice ..... Write on!

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