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By musicalsuicide

The fear in their eyes
I want to see their pain.
The sight of torture motivates me.
The quiver in their voices.
I want to hear their terror.
The sounds of bone splintering moves me.
The shame in their hearts.
I want to humiliate them further.
The smell of blood excites me.
The panic in their minds.
I want to imagine their dismay.
The thought of flesh ripping facsinatesĀ me.
I sharpen my knifes.
Then go seek my next victim.
Am I taking lives?
No, I am giving them away.

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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Published on Friday, October 1, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Mmmm like reading a horror movie. Love it. Nice job. ; )

  • T-Nothing On Friday, October 1, 2010, T-Nothing (38)By person wrote:

    ah, this is totally my kinda piece. dark and brutal. paints a very bloody and grotesque image, i totally dig it! killer write my friend

  • A former member wrote: i liked this. we can all relate to the feeling of wanting to seriously hurt someone

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