Rain Dancer

By The_Unspoken

And there he danced
until there was silence
until nothing was left
until the dawn rose swiftly above the night sky
he waited . . . for something better
but it never came
he was there in the morning
cold . . . curled up against the rocks
the lapping of the waves at his feet
then there he realized
there wasn't anything else
he might as well go back
dig up all those things he overlooked
and study them closely

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Copyright 2003 The_Unspoken
Published on Monday, June 9, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Midnight Phoenix On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    An interesting piece that could very well be added to.

  • manywalks On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    I agree with nemo, would love to see this expanded, nice read the way it is though. ~ mw

  • A former member wrote: Great start..I hope to see more of your work! Welcome to DP -GOD

  • A former member wrote: I like the fact the overlooked objects were studied, and not joined... like there was still the hope of something better. Who knows, maybe I*m just crazy. Anyway, well written and welcome to DP

  • PaperPromises On Monday, June 9, 2003, PaperPromises (53)By person wrote:

    deep very suitable for darkpoetry.. i like it.

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, June 9, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hmm....nice, i like it

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