within

By keltruth7

A meadow filled with butterflies
a dream within a dream
chaos, broken screams
beauty through dangerous means
a pink floating cloud
a serpent hiding in the grass
what is this telling me
a dream within a dream

golden sands
turquoise waters
empty graves
nameless faces
its my subconscious
my dream
within
my dreamsĀ 

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Copyright 2010 keltruth7
Published on Wednesday, August 11, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: a welcome change from the usual dross. rhythm, imagery, content... but at the same time, feels to be missing something. what is it?

  • Meadowhawk On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Meadowhawk (160)By person wrote:

    NICE! Well described chaos of the dream world.

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