Some Night in December
By Moonflower
You wrapped your arms around
me
that night
it
was
a cold december
and I think you just needed
some warmth in your life
So you layed your hands on my body,
hot and soothing,
your
cold fingers
lay heavily
on my stomache,
my pulse
rising
and
falling
in harmony with yours
I could feel
it through my shirt,
each beat perfectly
in sync.
your
breath whispered quietly,
burning my shoulder,
leaving it cool
and moist,
I could feel what you were
thinking
our thoughts as perfectly in sync as our
heart beats
As you moved smoothly
over my legs and back,
I didn't
know if you were nervous, but my
hands were shaking.
The morning light
shone in
weakly
through those dirt stained doors,
reflecting
your image in the glass
As you stood up
to throw on your jeans and
flannel
rushing off to work,
and smiling as you said
good bye.
Comments on "Some Night in December"
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A former member wrote:
It's been too long since I've read something of yours...I hope you return soon...
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A former member wrote:
wow... this tastes exactly as a memory should... and it hurts so much at the same time.
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A former member wrote:
This was so beautifully written...and so nostalgic...December and the cold weather can't come soon enough, that's for sure...
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On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
Oooh..this took me from one scene..pulsing and energetic..hot and enticing..to another scene..were its over..the sun is rising and you're saying your goodbyes..I like that sudden twisting of time in the same frame..meaning that it flowed smoothly and connected..the words..said right can move.."burning my shoulder,leaving it cool and moist,"so in burning your shoulder..it is cold and moist?..interesting way of envisioning..ponders that for a second...well thanks for the nice read..