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Better
By SeventhCircle
Another one hit the ground
And they knew they were better
Even though they were nothing special
We've got hope, they said
Hope failed them
And they spit out the dust
They cried
As the world laughed
The sky's the limit
Until the earth envelops you
What's the use of trying
When you've been below
You've seen the hatred
Love has crushed you
Turn away
Walk away
You're not better
Hope says so
You're not special
Hope failed you
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Copyright 2003 SeventhCircle
Published on Saturday, June 7, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Better"
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321)
wrote:
Very Nice. many e motions flowing.
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On Monday, June 9, 2003, blackdarkness
(228) wrote:
this is a great write!!! makes you think
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On Saturday, June 7, 2003, manywalks
(750) wrote:
The third stanza could stand on its own. Nice little thought provoking piece this was to read, thanks. ~ mw
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On Saturday, June 7, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
hmm...makes me think a bit, nice write
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A former member wrote:
this is really depressing...
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