We'll never dare come this way again Blue Bones
By Bella Butchery
Shadows lay waste
to execution
footprints in the ashes
fan
and respire
our faith filled skulls
Clinched
silent fingers
beneath charcoal skies
and this will tell you all
nothing
A baby picture
or a dead poem
i dont
know the difference anymore
presence
present
when
the sun
leaks through the shades
butterflies lie
at home
and thats when all the
white white chapels disappeared
looking for patterns in
the light
Once
again i woke
upon forest floor
with an ancient campfire
in my belly
the one who melts your bones
and sells your
strings
remember my name
cracked cello baroness
show
me your secrets
in red red pools
striped across the
snow
capped linoleum
my hands
are
shaking
Im trembling
idly
if i can just figure out
this feeling
out
ill rest
with the rest
of the souls
down here
and if i could count
all the times i was
told to go away
i would have just as
many as i would have
wanted to
stay
Awards
Comments on "We'll never dare come this way again Blue Bones"
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On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
Wow, that was so amazing! The imagery in this is astonishing. I dont see how this could have been any better portrayed. Great Great Great write. Loved it!
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A former member wrote:
Incredibly vivid, a tangible brittleness. This is the stuff of brilliance.
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On Monday, July 12, 2010, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
delicate like singed feathers and somber songs. don't stop or anyone. heart.
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2010, unspeakable truth
(94) wrote:
What a wonderful piece to return with. Love it, love it....
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A former member wrote:
amazing imagery within your words here my friend... indeed a great piece of art. :)
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On Thursday, July 1, 2010, Wiccad
(124) wrote:
This is a great piece, emotional and vivid. Nice work.
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On Thursday, July 1, 2010, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
you paint a vivid portrait here - brilliant
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A former member wrote:
Loved this, it has been awhile. Dark... and worth every moment I spent reading it. Much enjoyed. =)
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A former member wrote:
this reminds me of cinema; specifically a movie called 'teenage dirtbag'. . . .a somber real gritty little indie flick; matches your somber real gritty voice and tone here. crashing piece.....good to see you post.