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The Untold
By HumanMonstrosity
Decoction of Nightshade and acid water, Cobwebs cling to Claustrophobic Dreams. Plastic smiles and empty shells of once was. Growing sick like knife blades in my stomach, breathing stolen air. Secrets kept by words never spoken, torn asunder by decay. Cold sun shines on lost hope, emotionless the sleeping face.
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Copyright 2010 HumanMonstrosity
Author's Note:
Hello everyone. My name is Dave. This is my first poam ever to be Posted on any site and be read by the public. I plan on posting many more in the near future. So i hope you enjoy it and i would love to see some comments and hear what you guys think.Comments on "The Untold"
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A former member wrote:
Amazing write my friend... welcome to DP! Write on. :)
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On Thursday, July 1, 2010, lupus tenebrae
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wrote:
Dark and painful imagery, "Secrets kept by words never spoken, torn asunder by decay." That was quite a powerful line as well, nice piece.
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
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Such vivid imagery brought to life in such little words, magnificent piece here. "Growing sick like knife blades in my stomach, breathing stolen air." That made me cringe very intreging write, thank you for sharing =)
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