5 Seconds
By Daryl Bracken
I lay on my back looking up at the sky
I see the blade as it hangs
high
I see it plunge downward and slice like a scythe
I see as
my head tumbles and falls
they say your life flashes before your
eye
you relive your whole life before your die
you see your hopes
and dreams in all there glory
you see the things you did even the
gory
5 seconds they say you have to relive your life
5 seconds
to relive all of the strife
5 seconds to remember the love of your
wife
5 seconds to recall your whole damn life
They say for
5 seconds you see all you've done
and then all is forgotten forever
gone
this may be but for me 5 seconds is to long
I would rather
just die and be over and gone
I don't want to remember the things
that brought me here
I never had memories I would call dear
I
only have thoughts that I fear
I don't need 5 seconds to relive this
time here
Now for 5 seconds I see that in awe
they hold
my head up and I can see all
My body lies headless detached and so
small
for 5 seconds I see no life memories just how I fall
Comments on "5 Seconds"
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
My friend sometimes, 5 seconds is all it takes you never know what's instored. Great write and thank you for sharing =)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
Those last two stanzas I liked the best. Flow was a bit choppy at times but liked the concept and your outlook on it. 5 seconds of truth of who you have been over an entire lifetime sounds like too long indeed. Thank you for sharing and welcome to DP :)