Drifting Away
By Disciple_Of_Christ
The weight of my pain crashes down on me like a 50 ton boulder
I
mean my stress cant just be dusted off my shoulders
As my life goes
on i seem to be getting colder
But on the up side i learn more as
i get older
Now im a man no longer trapped by childish things
And im no longer stuck in my childish way
As the sun goes down the
night becomes my day
I feel less in pain but my stress stays the same
And i think that it will always be that way
Very stressed out or
depressed and in pain
Man my life is strange
An
i been shocked by it in every single way
I was even yesterday when
i learned was my little sister did when she snuck away
It killed me
an added to my stress an pain
I love my sister to death an couldn't
see her in that way
Today i look at her the same
Because there's
no other way shes my little sister and that will never change
Once again the night became my day
I let the past go as i begain
to drift away
Because here is NOT somewhere i can stay
Comments on "Drifting Away"
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
I agree with wolfy here, you were straight to the point, stress is no joke and it will wear you down if you let it. 2nd to last line i think you meant to say "began" instead of "begain" anyways, another well crafted piece here, I hope you find that book bud, I'd love to read some more of your works, take care till next time =)
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On Monday, June 14, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Stress can be an incredible burden,. that as time goes on just becomes more colossal in size, well done, you really were spot on with this one.