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Finally
By musicalsuicide
So I can finally give up
And let this silence wash over me
You
won't be here
There will be no more hugs in the rain
No
more kisses in the dark
I will be gone
Just try not to
forget
Those late night walks by the woods
Or those random drives
in the city
Tell everyone i miss them
Give them my love
You know its time
I can see that sheet going over my head
Mom is crying
What are you doing.....
Put away the knife
I don't want you with me
Stop before its too late
This
is my trip alone
Now is the time
To let me go
Finally...............
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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Published on Friday, May 21, 2010.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Finally"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful... A saddened tie with pain, very good write
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On Friday, May 21, 2010, Wiccad
(124)
wrote:
Today my clouds are weeping and now I know why. Blessed Be where ever you are )0(
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A former member wrote:
i DID cry, don't give up ): if you give up, we all will soon
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A former member wrote:
dont ever give up. an amazing write. i nearly cried reading it. thanks. please dont give up though
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On Friday, May 21, 2010, Morgoth
(36) wrote:
I love how it builds up and then sort of sighs with the "finally........" at the end. I can totally understand you because I've been down that road before as well.
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