Finally

By musicalsuicide

So I can finally give up
And let this silence wash over me
You won't be here

There will be no more hugs in the rain
No more kisses in the dark
I will be gone

Just try not to forget
Those late night walks by the woods
Or those random drives in the city

Tell everyone i miss them
Give them my love
You know its time

I can see that sheet going over my head
Mom is crying
What are you doing.....

Put away the knife
I don't want you with me
Stop before its too late

This is my trip alone
Now is the time
To let me go

Finally...............

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Copyright 2010 musicalsuicide
Published on Friday, May 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Beautiful... A saddened tie with pain, very good write

  • Wiccad On Friday, May 21, 2010, Wiccad (124)By person wrote:

    Today my clouds are weeping and now I know why. Blessed Be where ever you are )0(

  • A former member wrote: i DID cry, don't give up ): if you give up, we all will soon

  • A former member wrote: dont ever give up. an amazing write. i nearly cried reading it. thanks. please dont give up though

  • Morgoth On Friday, May 21, 2010, Morgoth (36)By person wrote:

    I love how it builds up and then sort of sighs with the "finally........" at the end. I can totally understand you because I've been down that road before as well.

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