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to be me..
By insanelyinane
words losing all meaning
thoughts flowing without any reasoning
god!!sobriety is really hurting
brain pounding hands trembling
the feeling of control is so debilitating..
the wounds deep inside
reemerging
the pain once drowned by gallons of booze resurrecting
memories once cherished are all but fleeting
overshadowed by betrayals
and reminders of my own meteoric rise and eventual falling..
ah
what one would give to go back to the starting
to a new life which
would be of my own choosing
alas now im down to imbecilic rhyming
and finding solace among words whilst discarding
any thoughts of
myself finally proving
to the world constantly ‘opinionating’…
but if i could take to slashing
or even the noose tightening
it is with cowardice that i have always been grappling…
in the
end i go back to my world of words convinced by my own lying….
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, musicalsuicide
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wrote:
this makes me sad and want to hug someone...
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, insanelyinane
(9) wrote:
thank you all for ur kind remarks...it sure does mean a lot to me...
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A former member wrote:
not bad at all. :) welcome to dp. ~ hdb.
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On Saturday, May 8, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
Not bad for a first post, it's perfectly morbid, I like it. I'm interested to see how your writing develops from this.
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A former member wrote:
Heya II.. this is pretty depressing... I think I'd like to see more metaphors, but I have a penchant for figures.... of speech.... of course. Welcome to the Valley, as V would say.
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