The Anger Within
By foreverNalways
The Anger gripping in my throat,
that i've tryed so hard to control.
Is escaping from my lips, my heart,
my soul.
You were the one I cared about.
Now you make me want
to scream.
Why did you have to go and fuck it up.
Now, I dont
even want you near me.
Oh one day, Oh one day all women become
monsters.
The Anger will be the death of us, like I knew it
would.
You should have stayed away from me.
I've never really
been good.
This same drama, repeats itself every time.
You say
you have a broken heart, but so do I.
Oh one day, Oh one day
all women become monsters.
The Anger dwells inside of me, wanting
to be set free.
I try to restrain, but this is our destiny.
I
set it free, I watch you drop to your knees in pain.
Run away while
you can little girl.
This is not a game.
This is life, run and
hide.
This is your last chance.
Oh one day, Oh one day
all women become monsters.
You die slowly.
A cry for help.
No one will live to tell
Our story.
Black and white.
Our story.
We all die.
Our story.
I'm sorry.
Oh one day, Oh one day all women become monsters.
Comments on "The Anger Within"
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On Sunday, May 2, 2010, foreverNalways
(39) wrote:
of course. =J teehee
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, foreverNalways
(39) wrote:
haha like kick her ass.
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On Saturday, May 1, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
Well that's one way. haha
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, foreverNalways
(39) wrote:
hell ya. lol shes not allowed to contact me unless its like a life or death situation. ive cut her out of my life. here, go to high-as-fuck 's work. its her profile. =/ ull understand what i mean hun. she made an account and started posting ridiucal poems about me. but i dont want to get into another fight like thing with her again so i leave it as this.
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
Oh yes I've seen that. I was actually wondering about that. I meant to ask you a while ago but I had to leave because I was late for the school play of Willy Wonka. I think that kind of borderlines on obsession what she has for you..I'm sure she'd never harm you but if you feel harrassed you can always do something about that.
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, foreverNalways
(39) wrote:
haha i actully figured out it was a song after i wrote it. while i was writing it, yes i wanted her to feel the pain, revenge of sort. but now, i see that i shouldnt have this emotion for her mistakes. and it was actully about an old lover, that is getting on my nerves with constant beggings for her back, when shes the one who cheated.
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
It seems like she's either realized her mistake or desperately wants someone to love her. Or maybe both. However, there is no excuse for anyone to constantly hound you to take them back. Have you put your foot down on the situation?
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On Thursday, April 29, 2010, freak_with_issues
(47) wrote:
hey hun whos this for?
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On Thursday, April 29, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
I can't help but admire such anger, it's awe-inspiring. Nice write, it must have been quite relieving to let this out, thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
Great write.....anger, such a strong emotion...glad you could capture what really goes on.
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On Thursday, April 29, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
Well the first thing I thought of when reading this was "One Day All Women Will Become Monsters" is a song. Just throwing that out there. I think you have a very unique talent for writing. I like the direction you took with this piece. You definitely have seething anger pent up inside of you. I bet this is for a lover, perhaps? The hurt caused by someone you trusted, someone close to you? Do you seek revenge? Or just want them to know how you feel. Very nice write. Write on.