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I Flee
By maggot death
She guards me
She feeds me
She believes in me
I let
her.
She needs me
I trust her
She wants me to stay
But I flee.
I flee from her.
Like the wind,
The...smoothe wind
Passing straight through you
cutting
Passing through your body
slitting
sharply
through the world
And going on forever
I flee.
I flee to somewhere better,
somewhere more calm
more reassuring
more respectful
more understanding.....
When
my mother competes
against my father
the overall choice
is
mine.....
Should I flee with my father? Or stay here,
with my mother?
"I choose my father"
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Copyright 2010 maggot death
Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2010.
Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I wrote this in reading class today....actually goes deeper into myself than previousely thought....And, this poem is pretty much absolutely true. A decision needs to be made....and it's up to me to make itComments on "I Flee"
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343)
wrote:
Should I stay or should I go? That's a big decision.Nevertheless hope you enjoy your stay.Nice write on making a major decision.I could feel the wind slicing.Nice.
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
That's pretty heavy. I can't imagine making a decision like that would be very easy. Being in a position to choose can't be either. A tough choice, I wish you luck. Thank you for sharing.
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2010, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
Sounds like you've already made your decision, now you just have to be the one to tell your mother, good luck with your new experiences you get while with your father, and it was a rather good write as well
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