emotional blow up doll.

By i tremble

 How naive was I to think that
I could complete you?

 My body,
though eager,
could never quite
quench your desire.

 Throw my legs 
into whatever position
that you prefer.

 Twist my body
into painfully
unnatural positions to
drive you to the brink
and beyond.

For the moment,
everything is fine.

So go ahead.Dip your dirty hands
into the deep well of
my emotion.

 We both know that
no matter how ravenously
you feed and no matter
whether or not you stuff yourself
bloated to the point of immobilityit will never be enough.

 But I'll be damned if you say
that I never tried.

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Copyright 2010 Jodeana Brake
Published on Sunday, March 14, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I doubt that I'll leave the title as it is.
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  • ANGELSLAYER On Sunday, March 14, 2010, ANGELSLAYER (118)By person wrote:

    In order to compete someone you must be equals. Be strong and find someone who will give back as much as is given. Nice writing, strong emotion.

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    Hurt at the cost of someone else's pleasure? Not so sure you should keep on trying. Expressive writing very well done.

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