...

By muckraker


drizzle down
soaked
and now
skin wet
all said
i been
better,
wetter,
warmer
perhaps i'm far too bitter,
or this coffee needs more sugar,
regardless,
this poem ain't workin out,
pout.

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Copyright 2003 muckraker
Published on Tuesday, May 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Hehe...Like it!! Put a smile on my face and a flitter in my heart. Brilliant. -Carl

  • AbjectColloquialist On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, AbjectColloquialist (31)By person wrote:

    hehehe, noice. I usually backspace at a failed attempt, you make it enjoyable.

  • Audrey_Star On Monday, July 28, 2003, Audrey_Star (26)By person wrote:

    nice read.

  • DoctorAsh On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    LMFAOROTFLMAO,LMAOA-------look>>>> a small box with a few words of encouragement>>[nicely done]+plus another small box with a few words of enlightenment>>>>>>>[goood effort, yup].D&A

  • A former member wrote: lol... humerous.. cute.. i like it

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