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By muckraker
drizzle down
soaked
and now
skin wet
all said
i been
better,
wetter,
warmer
perhaps i'm far too bitter,
or this coffee needs more sugar,
regardless,
this poem ain't workin out,
pout.
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Copyright 2003 muckraker
Published on Tuesday, May 27, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Hehe...Like it!! Put a smile on my face and a flitter in my heart. Brilliant. -Carl
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, AbjectColloquialist
(32) wrote:
hehehe, noice. I usually backspace at a failed attempt, you make it enjoyable.
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On Monday, July 28, 2003, Audrey_Star
(26) wrote:
nice read.
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
LMFAOROTFLMAO,LMAOA-------look>>>> a small box with a few words of encouragement>>[nicely done]+plus another small box with a few words of enlightenment>>>>>>>[goood effort, yup].D&A
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A former member wrote:
lol... humerous.. cute.. i like it
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