Forever.Part.1

By locoreality

 Do i really love you yes i do
This is the only way to explain it to you
It has to be on a day when the rain falls
so we can count the rain drops together ifs its day or night it doesn't matter
Every drop is me saying to you i love you
My words to you are true  just like the raindrops that are pure and true
Pure and true is what i see when i look at you
I am blind to the rest of the world all i see is you
My life is yours and if i could the world would be yours to
I don't know how much of your love my mind and heart can stand
But if to much of your love would kill me i guess i am a dead man
You can only once but in the after life my love for you  will still be true
No one or anything will ever take the place of you
Even when i am dead and gone my love for  you will carry on 
It will remain to be and for the eyes of the world to see
You are and always will be the only one for me

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Copyright 2010 locoreality
Published on Sunday, March 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Sunday, August 27, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    touching and a bit whimsical...

  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, March 8, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Touching, a good poem. Keep writting.

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