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Like you
By Stricken
I want to be like you
Its so silent underground
I can feel you in snowflakes
of your love that has fallen
I can sense your footsteps
That are all but forgotten
Its not your thoughts that linger
here
Its the hearts that wish to hear
You whisper in the
wind
Although I feel like giving in
But I only wish to
be like you
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Copyright 2010 Stricken
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Dilated View
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wrote:
I found serenity in the memory. Peaceful but aching. An interesting read.
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On Monday, January 25, 2010, mysterylove
(99) wrote:
"I can feel you in snowflakes of your love that has fallen I can sense your footsteps That are all but forgotten" --that sends shiver. sweet and simple. i like.
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On Monday, January 25, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
a clever & beautiful piece - well done indeed - & welcome
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