The Cronicles of David Neirad (pt.2)

By maggot death

I still wondered if what I saw in my head was just imagination.....or not.


It had to be, right? I could've never witnessed such a scene without going insane...

I'm still pretty drowsy, and confused at that. I thought to myself,do I
have any friends? I went outside of my 'bedroom' to find out.

The room was filled with children of many profiles, many ages, many....


Then, I felt a sharp pain in my head. Then it all went dark.

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"Get Mai on the phone," the warden said to her accountant, as she drove
past the winding road. She drove so fast that she could have been in a race.

"...Mai? Yeah...yeah, hey listen. Can you tell Gabbie that the serum was
too powerful? Yea...well he's going to remember something very soon, and we can't risk that..."

She rounded a tight left corner going about 75 mph. She was headed for the orphanedge.

"I have to put some false thoughts in his head...Mai? Yea...I have to...We can't risk going to court..."

"I still can't believe it took a year for me to find out....Mai? Tell Gabbie to make the right serum this time..."

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Copyright 2010 maggot death
Published on Friday, January 22, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Short Story"

Author's Note:

Im sorry, but i might not post another part to this series for a while. i hope you enjoy:)
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  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    I wish I knew what all this has to do with one kid and his family? The anwers are coming I hope. Nice visuals. Write on.

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