The 13th year (pt.7)

By maggot death

I decided that I wanted to show up. I will ask one of the jailguards to accompany me to the courtyard.

I wonder if i'm making the right choice.

So that's what I did. I travelled down the long, twisted way of the jail exit, past the many complicated locks, and into the courtyard. And there I saw who was waiting for me.

It was the kid! He had a bizzare look on his face, and looked kind of strange all around. It wasn't scary, just weird.

"We never officially met yet, right?" the kid asked me. He offered me a handshake, "Names Nived."

I took the handshake, "Hey, i'm Koddam, but you can call me Kody."

He still seemed a little off,the bags under his eyes explaining past tortures of life, "I'll call you by your last name, got it Neirad?"

"Uh, sure," I stated, unsure of this guy's stability. "Is that all you wanted me here for?"

"Yea, I needed to meet you."

I didn't feel like telling him that I felt the same, for some reason.

I stayed up again most of the night, thinking about what will await me for the next 5 years, until my 13th birthday.

 

               1 year later...               

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Copyright 2010 maggot death
Published on Saturday, January 9, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Short Story"

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  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    Very good you are holding the reader into your story. The phone plays a big part in this tale so you need to describe your cell better in the earlier sections. Maybe you could have picked it up and listened, but no dial tone, like it didn't work at all. Then when it did work the reader would have been perplexed as you were. write on.

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