The 13th year (pt.5)
By maggot death
I stayed up all night wondering what that person meant by saying 'I know
you didn't'.
I kinda figured that the person was talking about my
crime.
But I still didn't know who said it, and I didn't know how
they would know.
A couple of hours later, my jailkeeper brought
me to this weird table. There were three rooms connected to the table,
but seperated from each other. I soon realized it was time for lunch.
The lock on my door was extremely ahead of its time, with strange
things that obviousely assemble it. Ahead of me was a chair, and a section
of table with just enough room for me to eat. The walls weren't sound-proof,
so we would be able to converse.
The loudspeaker then went on,
"WE DO NOT USUALLY BRING YOU TO EAT LUNCH OUTSIDE OF YOUR CELLS. BUT, DUE
TO TWO NEW PRISONERS, WE ARE CELEBRATING."
We all started talking
to each other, meeting each other. Most of the talking was the girl, because
the black haired kid was pretty solemn.
"Hi, Kody" the girl
said with a grin. "I'm Gabbie, and I used to be the only one here, but
now i'm not."
How did she Know my name?
she must've
seen the skeptisism in my eyes, because she said, "Oh, your name? The warden
told me."
Gabbie then paused, looked at the other kid, and wispered
to me, "She didn't tell me his name."
I went to sleep that night
thinking, again. Thinking about the boy. Why didn't the warden tell Gabbie
his name? Why mine?
I went to sleep that night, wondering when
I will officially meet him.
Comments on "The 13th year (pt.5)"
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On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Sorry, just the first can leave, not the second one.
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On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
The suspense is mounting, I like it. Now replace can leave with could leave because you are speaking in past tense. Well written so far.