The 13th year (pt.4)

By maggot death

Now it was my turn to take my picture. A burly man pushed me through the door to enter.


Age:8
Eyes:Hazel w/green
Hair:dirty blonde
first nme:Koddam
Last nme:Neirad
crime:murdered a family of 6
sentence:5 yrs

To me, the warden seemed a little nervous about me in the room. Like she knew something.

"Hey, Koddam. Uh...how are you?" she asked me.
I just stared at her, wanting to take my picture so thatĀ IĀ could leave.

"...Ok then. let's take the picture so that you can be on your way."

On my way out, I thought that I heard something:

"I know you didn't..."

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Copyright 2010 maggot death
Published on Friday, January 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Short Story"
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  • Malcholm Dark On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    Good, Good. When describe the girl, write it out unless you are reading it off the paper. You took the person away and her innocence and replaced it with a description. I like it so far. write on.

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