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The 13th year (pt.4)
By maggot death
Now it was my turn to take my picture. A burly man pushed me through
the door to enter.
Age:8
Eyes:Hazel w/green
Hair:dirty
blonde
first nme:Koddam
Last nme:Neirad
crime:murdered a
family of 6
sentence:5 yrs
To me, the warden seemed a little
nervous about me in the room. Like she knew something.
"Hey,
Koddam. Uh...how are you?" she asked me.
I just stared at her, wanting
to take my picture so that I could leave.
"...Ok then. let's
take the picture so that you can be on your way."
On my way
out, I thought that I heard something:
"I know you didn't..."
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Copyright 2010 maggot death
Published on Friday, January 8, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Short Story"
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On Tuesday, February 23, 2010, Malcholm Dark
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wrote:
Good, Good. When describe the girl, write it out unless you are reading it off the paper. You took the person away and her innocence and replaced it with a description. I like it so far. write on.
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