Suicide Card

By melodies revisited

It seems that you blame

Me
Him
Her
Them

Anyone but yourself
You fucking hypocrite
I hate what you do
I hate to see you like this

You used to be, once were my

Lover
Friend
Bestie
inspiration

But your inspiration's run dry
And I'm writing something new
With new ideas and thoughts
From someone better than you

Yeah, that's right, babe. We are

Through
Done
Over
Finished

And it's all because you pulled

Out that foolish

Suicide card

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Copyright 2009 melodies revisited
Published on Saturday, December 19, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i'd have done the same were i in your shoes so i can understand. a total gem of a write and well thought through and executed!

  • Deaths Apostle On Saturday, December 19, 2009, Deaths Apostle (65)By person wrote:

    Suicide...Ha

  • Dilated View On Saturday, December 19, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Power through :) That's a real bummer that people consider it an option.

  • A former member wrote: Suicide, the wrong way out. Powerful work Melody!

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