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You said goodnight without an "I love you"
By melodies revisited
You said goodnight
Without an "I love you"
And I almost cried
I don't want to say it
To your face, but
I want to hear your voice
Say those words again
More than anything
That the world has to offer
Please contact me again
And let me hear you say
Those three words
Just a "nite" was all
That I have to go on
And a statement
That you aren't going
to sleep tonight
Or go to bed yet
Just come back to me
Tell me you love me
One last time
Before my heart shatters
From lack of your presence
And I shed the tears
I swore I wouldn't cry.
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Copyright 2009 melodies revisited
Published on Friday, December 18, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "You said goodnight without an "I love you""
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A former member wrote:
Being denied an "I Love You" is probably one of the worse Feeling available to mankind... I relate to it, good work ^^
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A former member wrote:
your poem brought tears to me. i was the one that didn't say those words, and he begged. it was the last time i ever heard his voice. three words mean so much said and when left unsaid they can feel like a thousand knives right in your heart.
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On Friday, December 18, 2009, Dilated View
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wrote:
:( It's all about jumping the gun and throwing it out first to put them on the spot. If it backfires just claim you said elephant shoes. Have a lovely evening.
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A former member wrote:
or olive juice....that one works too....
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A former member wrote:
I love you
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A former member wrote:
*inspired*
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