Fractured

By ubiquitoussoul

Glass splinters,
A crystalline swelling,
Globular clusters burn,
Methamphetamine pure,
The Black Sea,
Like diamond cut hail,
Your vision.

Ice cold my eyes gaze,
Into deep the canvas,
Snow-flaked cascade,
Salt drizzled,
Your deteriorating soul,
That with a thought's touch,
Pitched onto a golden bowl,
Dark thirsted nectar sweet it tastes,
A young woman's heart hurt,
Burning ambrosia...

Dripping...

(Oil thinned paint the scent of pain drips)

Slow...

Faucet nose over my mouth,
Red kisses stolen,
Wound to womb,
Cardinals in bloom,
Sound of lost again.

Piercing an anguish turmoil,
Lavish in laughter tickled my heart,
Stows a weight so light,
Feathered with madness;
Collecting heartbeats polishing,
This jasper bracelet 'round my wrist,

Most beautiful under my skin,
Picturesque Sceneries,
Convulsing within,
My bleeding euphoria,
Wearing mere proof.

Infinity pulses,
So long as I,

Exist.

 

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© Adrian Torres
Published on Tuesday, December 1, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Imsosickxxx On Wednesday, February 6, 2013, Imsosickxxx (80)By person wrote:

    I can't believe I've gone this long without the pleasure of reading this or any of your works! Just phenomenal. Can't wait to read more =)

  • A former member wrote: i cant say i fully understand the workings of ur mind...but that's what i like about ur poems....imma re-read this ;) loved the line "burning ambrosia" write on! "cardinals in bloom" was also a very beautiful line...agree with Kinki that this was a total mind fu(( :)

  • A former member wrote: I rarely come across words that make me think. You put them together so delicately, and make this writing exponentially more significant than any other. Great write, great write,

  • A former member wrote: wow...very twisted and I love the way you write it so detailed I have yet to learn such detailed perfection!!

  • Rowan On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    Wow. Words escape me. This was written so beautifully. The first part made me think of how easy it is to lose one's sense of direction and head for disaster. All it takes is just one slip. Amazing, Soul.

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