Between the Spaces of Time

By Moonflower

As star dust spills
across this black canvas
sparkling into a forbidden
slice of heaven
I sigh and let go of the easel
waiting to see your
irridecent eyes
staring into the Suns blazing
rays

...and i stand back....
immersed in the beauty
of your Saturn lined aura
as you dance around the rings
of eternity
and i watch
from my broken Milky Way
hoping for gravity
to hold me here
in this moment

but i let go...
and I fall into the waves
of cosmic balance
wading on the shores of
Neptune's Celurean sands.

We sweep across the loving
folds of time
painting stars on the vast
canvas of our hearts
breaking out of the circular motion
of life
in this never ending galaxy...
I see the wastelands of mars in
your eyes
and you find redemption in
my moon struck sighs...

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Copyright 2009 Moonflower
Published on Monday, October 19, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i feel suspended between the air and ground when i read your work...another completely out of this world read..."As star dust spills across this black canvas" what a picture right there! write on!

  • A former member wrote: quite the extended metaphor... it's like science meets love and spawns religion.... through art, with a brush of the classical bringing suggesting a hint of the historical.............. nice !

  • A former member wrote: The parallel you made with the universe I find it quite amusing, you chose perfect words. Great work.

  • Dei On Monday, October 19, 2009, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    this was so beautiful. it just put me in this whistful transient moment. thank you! you made me day with this one! -natelle

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