Already dead
By SinneR
Cold, dark, dirty world,
you spit betrayal and hate.
You want my soul to take,
grab
it without a word.
Every sin I have made
you have been
writing down.
That is why from dusk till dawn
you have been preparing
your blade.
Big, shiny, mirror blade,
sharp, ready to intervene.
In great shape it have been,
waiting for take me to the grave.
My chest you want to cut,
rip me open and take your prize,
but among all the blood,
you will be surprised.
Between
the black lungs, in the middle,
beyond the brocken heart, deep inside,
there is no soul, no mistery, no riddle,
it has been a while since
i have died.
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Copyright 2009 SinneR
Comments on "Already dead"
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A former member wrote:
Putting myself in this story you told, Its very tricky. Like a fairy-tale with an ironic ending that wasn't quite expected. I like the topic, though.
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On Monday, February 14, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
Wow. Powerful words. Nice write. Dark and thats what we like;)
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On Thursday, January 20, 2011, ColorMeToxic
(238) wrote:
Nice write! :)
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On Friday, October 16, 2009, jajang829
(23) wrote:
Love the reveal at the end... the futile act prepared for thru the work...
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On Monday, October 12, 2009, chococat_122
(8) wrote:
loved it :)
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A former member wrote:
Made me think of a Zombie tune. impeccable rhyme no doubt, and craftily prepared... a nursery rhyme for the damned.