Already dead

By SinneR


Cold, dark, dirty world,
you spit betrayal and hate.
You want my soul to take,
grab it without a word.

Every sin I have made
you have been writing down.
That is why from dusk till dawn
you have been preparing your blade.

Big, shiny, mirror blade,
sharp, ready to intervene.
In great shape it have been,
waiting for take me to the grave.

My chest you want to cut,
rip me open and take your prize,
but among all the blood,
you will be surprised.

Between the black lungs, in the middle,
beyond the brocken heart, deep inside,
there is no soul, no mistery, no riddle,
it has been a while since i have died.

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Copyright 2009 SinneR
Published on Wednesday, October 7, 2009.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Putting myself in this story you told, Its very tricky. Like a fairy-tale with an ironic ending that wasn't quite expected. I like the topic, though.

  • Ladyhawke On Monday, February 14, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Wow. Powerful words. Nice write. Dark and thats what we like;)

  • ColorMeToxic On Thursday, January 20, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    Nice write! :) Scholar

  • jajang829 On Friday, October 16, 2009, jajang829 (23)By person wrote:

    Love the reveal at the end... the futile act prepared for thru the work...

  • chococat_122 On Monday, October 12, 2009, chococat_122 (8)By person wrote:

    loved it :)

  • A former member wrote: Made me think of a Zombie tune. impeccable rhyme no doubt, and craftily prepared... a nursery rhyme for the damned.

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