To be me

By SinneR

Desireless heart is searching
a beat in the ocean of sins.
Pitch black blood is crawling
under the senseless skin.
Tearing love away,
pieces are falling and nobody
can't seem to make them stay.

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Copyright 2009 SinneR
Published on Wednesday, October 7, 2009.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • soul_versing On Tuesday, May 16, 2017, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Self-made prisons are the worst; especially when you hold yourself in contempt, the torture never ends. There's plenty of beauty in your darkness..........Great piece! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: A tasty tidbit of poetic goodness! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Perfection in words a derelict pain for the word junkie. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: sounds like Love has stepped into the sea with pockets full of stones and is now drowning in apathy. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Short and sweet Scholar

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