Godly love, Godly God

By Wolk

I have seen the colors,
I have mixed them.
The sounds,
I mix them.

She is the pain,
The way to the red plain.
Nature, nature is unbeatable,
Fear, the fear is unspeakable.

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© 2009 Wolk
Published on Sunday, July 26, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I felt this as a warning. A softly seeded warning and yet a harbinger of hope too. There must be a way to hold on and to let go, to believe and to throw yourself madly into what may come....hence the fear? Really a powerful thoughtful piece.

  • A former member wrote: a powerful sentinel in this sentiment; and a delicate shift in the grace.

  • blue On Tuesday, November 24, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    This poem, these words have etched themselves upon my very being. I am utterly in its clutches. ~b

  • blue On Tuesday, October 27, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Such implications this brings forth for me... so pointed, so true. What you've expressed here in a few short lines is... overwhelming. Brilliant. ~b

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, July 26, 2009, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    An arrow that hits the bullseye. -Carl

  • blue On Sunday, July 26, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    This hits me in so many ways. Entirely captivating. ~b

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