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Bittersweet
By SeventhCircle
Everything tumbling down
Torn asunder, life’s not worth it
But the light at the end of the tunnel
Just won’t go away
Simplicity is a blessing
Better black than divided
Why must life be gray?
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Copyright 2003 SeventhCircle
Published on Tuesday, May 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Bittersweet"
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518)
wrote:
A well crafted poem. Simplicity is a blessing, when its made of words like these. Tiger
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
yoohee, loverly justin. short, to the point... i like it.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I like this one - we'd all get along if life were a neat little division of things...but it's not! Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, May 15, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
really nice, i aslo love ur info, fuck the stystem
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
it definately is confusing how things are always grey, you're much too hard of a critic on yourself, this is good ~Dawn
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A former member wrote:
Of course, better grey than black and white! But wonderful piece!
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A former member wrote:
I like this much!
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A former member wrote:
this poem's really bittersweet HEHEH I MADE A PUN anyways good job justin old boy, keep them comin'
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