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By Vampixie
The autumn leaves
Collect around my feet, and
for a second I can see you
playing amongst them,
until a cruel winter wind
blows the spark away
along with the leaves
swirling around in spirals
like my head.
So confused, it
doesn't make sense.
But then
neither does anything else.
Not now.
Now you're not here.
Why did you leave me
like this?
I loved you
and you loved me
didn't you?
So why did you leave me-
was it something I said
or did?
What did I do to deserve this?
I just need to see your face
one last time,
even if it's only to tell me
you don't love me anymore
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© 2008 Vampixie
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2017, worm
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wrote:
life is never cut and dried nor is it ever easy... you just learn to keep living... Be Well! ~worm~
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A former member wrote:
Not having closure is a terrible experience. I'm sorry you had to go through that, but at least you managed to express those feelings through Art. Hopes for the best.
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On Saturday, March 6, 2010, eske
(11) wrote:
It kinda makes me happy to read this. Y'know seasons are great to write about, love not so much. Images nobody can see? now that's tough to decide.
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On Monday, January 5, 2009, Joey
(31) wrote:
I like. i like. depressing. But artsy =p
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A former member wrote:
this is good. welcome to DP =]
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