Love

By Wren

A very complex thing
This love
I have to watch out for myself
and you
My love
Sit here and caress me
Ah, love
Eat but don't digest me
Yes love
Lay here with me and just breathe
Sweet love
Hold me in your arms and never let me go
Dear love
Love is more complicated than a man shall ever know
Young love
It's simple yet extravagant
This love
We are but inhabitants
In love

*This didn't quite turn out the way I wanted it to...*

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Copyright 2003 Wren
Published on Sunday, May 11, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Really makes me miss my ex boyfriend that must tell you it's great!

  • IceDragoness On Sunday, May 11, 2003, IceDragoness (195)By person wrote:

    Makes me jealous and curious again, but this is nice ~Dawn *feels all unloved and shit again*

  • Aurora_Light On Sunday, May 11, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    nice...I like it The begining caught meand well i like it

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, May 11, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    I think it's really good! Captures the feeling of love... Nice work, Wren!

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