Thinking

By Rebel_Angel

I wrote this in like 10 min and I didn't think it sounded too bad? let me know what u think! Go easy on me please.

I think about you all the time,
But do you think of me?
Do you wish to be with me as badly as I wish to be with you?
I don't know, and probably never will,
But if you do you don't show it well,
My head says let go,
But my heart says no!
How do I decide what to do,
Waiting for the answer isn't working,
I've been waiting,
But nothing ever comes about,
To take away all my doubt.

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Published on Friday, May 9, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Thinking"

On Saturday, September 11, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

not bad for 10 minutes
A former member wrote: i really think this is good..its like a mind process written out
On Monday, July 21, 2003, blackdarkness (227) wrote:

Sometimes the greatest work happens the fastest...I really like this keep it up
A former member wrote: i familirize with your write which is a good write for a matter of a few minutes
On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, Ravenblade (307) wrote:

Great write, especially for 10 minutes..It has an awesome flow and rhythm to boot, which are my 2 biggest poetic fetishes, those and imagery...I will definately look out for more work by you..
On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger (30) wrote:

Aurora is right we have helped you as much as we can an probably as much as you can stand.. the chioce is yours to make. no one can make it for you or tell you what to do. its all up to you. I pray for you.
On Friday, May 9, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (243) wrote:

I like this. I know how you feel. Nice work!
On Sunday, May 11, 2003, Sky Singer (153) wrote:

i fully agree.... and its amazing what we pour out of our hearts and souls in a matter of minutes
On Sunday, May 11, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

Rebel u've hread my commets and what i think u should do with it but as i've said i'm staying out of ur love life for as long as u want me to.
A former member wrote: i'm there.. right now... i'm weighing the cost of speaking my mind... it's heavy