The painting
By Any
Every single word
You said - fell
Like a water drop
On the painting
I had created
Of our relationship
Washing the color away
Drop by drop.
I did not want
It to be true
Tried to save it
The picture
I had spent
So much time on.
But now
I looked at it again
And saw that
There was nothing
Left anymore
On its white surface.
I could have cried
But I smiled
Knowing
That I would never
Forget the painting
Anyway
But that now
It was time
To restart
Painting
Again.
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© 2008 Nalle
Published on Friday, May 16, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, May 16, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
like you ripped them out of my heart m'dear.... ever so true... excellent
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On Friday, May 16, 2008, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Beautiful metaphor! Very skillfully worded and developed. Nicely done.
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On Friday, May 16, 2008, blue
(1409) wrote:
..and how!