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How Sadly Unoriginal
By ArtemisticSin
Staring at my reflection
In the dark
I tear up the note
He had left me
Look up
Down
Anywhere
But at my own eyes
I leave
Hands shaking
He leaves
Smiling while crying
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© 2008 ArtemisticSin
Published on Monday, March 24, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2008, carlosjackal
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wrote:
"Smiling while crying"..Killer ending to a brilliant little piece. Heart-wrencher. -Carl
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A former member wrote:
"Anywhere/But at my own eyes"..a ray of originality and poetic brilliance in an otherwise null write. I understand why you titled it like you did, but it does hold a little something special. Never stop.
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