stain

By insideout

Such pouty crimson lips
wrapping themselves so carelessly
around his lifeless lie
lights glimmer off the spit
and melt into mine

hypnotic beats and fluttering eyes
lucid notions transform motion
and it dies with a violent sigh

why baby, why..
one day
he'll be gone
and you'll be mine. 

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Published on Tuesday, March 11, 2008.     Filed under: "Perverse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This leaves me mystified... but I really like the first three lines... and the sigh....

  • Niemand On Tuesday, March 11, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    *filters*

  • A former member wrote: I like the way this poem really draws the reader in. ^_^ Enjoyed it.

  • Crimsonrose On Tuesday, March 11, 2008, Crimsonrose (9)By person wrote:

    great write!

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