The fall

By skully

You were everything
The one
The sun shone on you all day
Expensive
Yet somehow worth it all
A pun on the immortal

Always next to me
The sum
Of all things play
Incomparable
You made me whole
Hypnotised by your call

You got me through
So much fun
I couldn’t help but look your way
Priceless
Your worth incalculable
Then you were gone
And so came the fall


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© 2008 skully
Published on Saturday, February 23, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Any On Wednesday, May 7, 2008, Any (39)By person wrote:

    I like this... especially cause the first/second/third... lines also seem to have kind of connection. Thanks for sharing.

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